Assignment 5 - Part 7

My daughter preferred the earlier attempts with lots of lines.

and suggested a line of smaller skaters.

These guys on a background of ultramarine and permanent rose wash (the line of the barrier was blocked off with masking tape) I wanted to keep the freshness of unplanned drawing but I'm not happy with the layout of the figures. I added movement lines in plumb coloured ink which I'd like to remove - too late now - so I added a wash of permanent rose to hope you wouldn't notice....
Maybe better cropped?

This second version had too much background paint and again the figures aren't coherent.

I added someone detail and used a rubber to create some highlights

When cropped you get this

Or with a really close crop, this